On Fri, 7 May 2004 12:00:11 -0400 (EDT) fedora-docs-list-request@redhat.com wrote:
Looks like a good start. I would like to point out thats its better to use the latest default theme when taking these screenshots. Major of users would be more familiar with that and it would be consistent with the rest of the documentation.
We probably need such guidelines specified in a formal manner somewhere
regards Rahul Sundaram
Theme is fixed.
Regards, Peti
On Sun, 2004-05-09 at 08:41, Sulyok Péter wrote: http://sp.web.elte.hu/firewall-tutorial-en/sn-about.html
Theme is fixed.
Thanks for supplying the document XML source. Here are my fixes as a patch to the XML, along with some comments to explain them:
http://people.redhat.com/kwade/patches/fedora-docs/firewall-tutorial/firewal...
* Your writing is good and clear. Trying to help as an editor. I make various 'fixes', some of which are more my personal style. Please take them as you will, they are intended to make the writing clearer and to help the reader, especially the newbie.
* I'm sorry about the diff of the <para> blocks being so many lines; when I use M-q to indent paragraphs in Emacs, I get a very small indent size and I haven't tackled fixing that yet.
* internet - Internet -- common usage, an internet is an worldwide computer network, the Internet is the specific internetwork we are trying to connect to.
* For <ulink>, I make the target URL the linked text because I don't trust that it will appear correctly in PDF.
Let me know if you have any questions about what I changed in the patch. You should be able to edit the patch and use the command 'patch firewall-tutorial-en.xml firewall-tutorial-en.xml-kwade.patch' to apply the changes to your document.
I'd like to see this posted at http://fedora.redhat.com/docs as soon as possible!
- Karsten
On Fri, 2004-05-14 at 18:30, Karsten Wade wrote:
- internet - Internet -- common usage, an internet is an worldwide
computer network, the Internet is the specific internetwork we are trying to connect to.
Woops! I'm *sure* you meant that "internet" refers to a specific internetwork and "Internet" refers to the worldwide set of internetworks we all know when we "connect to the 'net".
Regards, -Matt
On Fri, 2004-05-14 at 03:05, Matt Hansen wrote:
On Fri, 2004-05-14 at 18:30, Karsten Wade wrote:
- internet - Internet -- common usage, an internet is an worldwide
computer network, the Internet is the specific internetwork we are trying to connect to.
Woops! I'm *sure* you meant that "internet" refers to a specific internetwork and "Internet" refers to the worldwide set of internetworks we all know when we "connect to the 'net".
Yes. It was late, and I blame ... poor editing?
:) - Karsten
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