https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
Chris I like to make changes using libreoffice. That is not the way Fedora Docs is provided, but I would use it to provide touchups or suggest corrections to text.
For example: Here is a slight cut and paste from the installation guide. I changed text for temporal order reads better. I would use LibreOffice change management, one can see the diffs. or Git repositories. Of course, if I had access to the raw text, I would likely provide pull requests.
Downloading Fedora Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
For alternative desktop environments or media built for more niche purposes, check out Fedora Spins. Each of these "spin" downloads provides a different set of default packages,After the initial installation you can add to your system to customize it for your needs. The installation process is the same for all spins and Editions, so you can use this guide for any choice you make. THE UNCHANGED TEXT
Downloading Fedora Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions tailored for some specific use cases. https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
For alternative desktop environments or media built for more niche purposes, check out Fedora Spins.
Each of these downloads provides a different set of default packages, but you can add to your system after the initial installation to customize it for your needs. The installation process is the same for all spins and Editions, so you can use this guide for any choice you make.
Leslie Leslie Satenstein Montréal Québec, Canada
On Sunday, June 20, 2021, 10:15:45 p.m. EDT, Chris Murphy lists@colorremedies.com wrote:
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein lsatenstein@yahoo.com:
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:
Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora IoT as a strong foundation for the IoT ecosystem.
Cloud is not offered on getfedora.
Thank you Peter for the feedback. There are many things that bother me.One, is not related to documentation Fedora media writer should also include a Fedora ISO download function. With an enhanced Fedora media writer, I would use it to click onto an ISO image to download, provide it with the USB device or DVD, and let it do both download and write to USB. It should also check the received iso for download errors. Here are my grammar rules from my schooling. write on xxx On should be replaced with about or onto as write about xxx or write onto xxx I write onto a paper. On can be used as He is on topic.
On vs onto, put the book onto the table. Where is the book? it is on the table. Similar distinction between "in and into" In many places the word see xxxxx should be refer to xxxxx see implies immediate. refer to is an optional deferred action. AmericanThere are five cars to choose from.International EnglishThere are five cars from which to choose. or You can choose from among five cars. Action statements are better than passive.Download xyz followed by abc to create the USB. better thanThe USB can be created by downloading xyz followed by abc.
My sources.English writing class in public school. And also "IEEE engineering writing and speech guides." Just my thoughts.
Regards Grandpa Leslie Leslie Satenstein Montréal Québec, Canada
On Monday, June 21, 2021, 8:20:09 a.m. EDT, Peter Boy pboy@uni-bremen.de wrote:
Am 21.06.2021 um 13:42 schrieb Leslie S Satenstein lsatenstein@yahoo.com:
Downloading Fedora
Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Cloud for scalable infrastructure, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user.
Just a remark. That section is wrong for several releases now. As a look at https://getfedora.org confirms it should read:
Fedora Editions Fedora provides three primary Editions. tailored for some specific use cases. The site, https://getfedora.org offers Fedora Workstation for the developer and desktop user, Fedora Server for organizational infrastructure, and Fedora IoT as a strong foundation for the IoT ecosystem.
Cloud is not offered on getfedora.
Hi Chris I browsed the documentation link and drilled down a bit. I do have a few comments. It seems to me that the documentation is written for a reader or user already familiar with FedoraTerms such as dnf, and some others are mentioned, without being defined. For example, I did not find a sentence that says "The dnf utility provided by Fedora is multipurpose, and providesthe user with a software package maintenance and as a system upgrade tool. dnf is included with current Fedora distributions.
Regards Leslie Leslie Satenstein Montréal Québec, Canada
On Sunday, June 20, 2021, 10:15:45 p.m. EDT, Chris Murphy lists@colorremedies.com wrote:
https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora/f34/
"Fedora rawhide User Documentation"
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