Thanks for all the feedback from the previous thread. I have inserted what i thought was best and cleaned things up a bit.
* I have left the man section in tact. Man I feel is still the majority method of choice over info.
* Completed the introduction and the missing paragraphs at the beginning of chapter 2.
I feel the doc is now complete through chapter 3 but would gladly be shown the errors of my ways :)
My working index is located at http://mindstorm.ath.cx:8080/index.php/HelpGuideIndex
The guide is located at http://mindstorm.ath.cx:8080/fedora-docs/help-guide-en/
I am certainly not a world class writer nor or even a particularly good one and in that spirit i gladly accept any and all continued feedback on this. I am also curious about the eventual inclusion of the help guide into the docs project upon its completion.
Thanks.
On Fri, 2004-04-02 at 13:14, Aaron Matteson wrote:
Thanks for all the feedback from the previous thread. I have inserted what i thought was best and cleaned things up a bit.
- I have left the man section in tact. Man I feel is still the majority
method of choice over info.
Aaron, maybe mentioning info/pinfo as another manual parsing option would be useful?
- Completed the introduction and the missing paragraphs at the beginning
of chapter 2.
I feel the doc is now complete through chapter 3 but would gladly be shown the errors of my ways :)
Spelling/grammar errors I found:
* In Introduction: - "yield" spelt wrong - "exhausted" spelt wrong - "Number 1" should probably be "Number One". * Chapter 2: - section 2.1,1, "foremost" spelt wrong - "invoke" spelt wrong - section 2.1.2, "explanation" spelt wrong - section 2.2.1, "application" spelt wrong - section 2.2.2, phrase should be "people's trials" - section 2.2.3, "convenient" spelt wrong (thanks for linking to us!) - section 2.2.4, "Internet" spelt wrong (should be capital "I")
Haven't checked the rest yet, but great work overall! :-)
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