I don't know where to report a bug, but the site suggests asking questions
on this mailing list.
Here are the corrections that need to be made:
- "The open source way is a practice, and this is it's *community of
-> "and this is *its* community of practice."
- "people interested in the how, why, and why" -> "people interested
the how, *[when / where / what]*, and why"
I'm sorry for bothering you.